Wonderland (Page 2) Posted on March 2, 2012 by skook The watch showing the number 13 was in the script. The skeleton as time keeper was my addition. The writer liked that.
That’s not terrible dialog. It might be trying a little hard to be a little too clever but it’s not terrible.
OK, this page is much more embarrassing to me. Terrible dialogue. Neat watch.
That’s not terrible dialog. It might be trying a little hard to be a little too clever but it’s not terrible.